nice I like it. You got my follow <3

in terms of you being an unscouted artist, you're already pretty far ahead. you have solid structure, a melody, etc. and you're right, the song does go pretty hard. I'd just like it not to be the melody to be what's making it go hard. For the most part, I think you definitely lack some punchy drums. There's various ways to make your drums stand out more and there's tons of easily accessible tutorials on youtube that show you how to get started. It mostly comes down to proper mixing but don't you worry, you can get solid results already with little work and you already seem to have basic knowledge, mostly. I'd also like to see some more variation in the tune itself. I think it's absolutely fine that you went twice for the same drop, only that I personally feel like there's not enough to justify this lack of variation (e.g. in between the two drops, there's just not much happening there). The genre you created here is mostly called "Phonk" and it's a pretty solid and doable genre to start out with music, if you can nail the mixing. Phonk songs are usually a good bit faster BPM wise but that also comes down to style and preference, and in the end art is about doing what you love.

I'm definitely willing to scout ya, I think that your general ideas and lack of variation + the somewhat "okay" mixing isn't enough to justify for me to *not* do it. But I think it's fair for me to tell you that some improvements to the drums and the other stuff is indeed something you might want to look into!

Keep it up!

I like it a lot. Imo, it's good enough to get ya scouted. There's always room for improvement, especially when it comes to mixing/mastering but you seem to have mostly nailed the structual part of the tune, except for a couple hickups here and there. But bottom line is: the song's pretty solid. I'd just like to see more of an artist profile so that the source of your tunes is more trustworthy and so that one can actually see who's behind and not that it's some reupload when the tune itself is actually stolen. So yeah, I'm looking forward to more music from you, I'll definitely keep an eye out.